英語四級作文範文範例
2015年6月英語四級作文外教版範文和評析(滬江網校版)Part I Writing
Online shopping has been a boon to many industries and companies looking to expand their markets. Also, it’s convenient for shoppers who are too busy to leave the house. However, in some cases nothing can replace a true face to face shopping experience.
Internet shopping is convenient for the mothers who spend all day doing house chores and for the fathers who work a full-time job. On the other hand, there are limits to shopping online, for example: guessing the correct size of clothing on a computer screen can be very frustrating.
For the busy mother and father, online shopping is a very useful and convenient tool. But, there are instances, like clothes shopping, where nothing beats the real thing.
點評:
作者在第一段描述了網購作為一種時尚給大家的生活帶來了便利,然後話鋒一轉,説網購仍然取代不了面對面的購物交流。
第二段主要還是從正反兩方面分析了網購的優勢和不足,以此描述大家對網購的'不同反應。
第三段作者表明了自己的觀點,對網購的便利和不足之處都做了描述。
綜合來講,本篇文章觀點明確,結構清晰,語言表達地道,有不少閃光詞彙,但是,內容深度上來講還有些欠缺,另外,最後一部分表達個人觀點,和第二段稍有重複。考生需要注意觀點的清晰,不宜模稜兩可。
2004年6月19日大學英語四級作文題目
A brief introduction to a tourist attraction
2004年6月19日大學英語四級作文範文
Welcome everyone, I am glad that you can come to Pingyao County, where there is the oldest Confucius temple. It was opened to the public Monday after a one-year renovation project.
I hope you can appreciate the spot indeed.
First, I will show the main building of the temple, its the most interesting spot here.
Second, we can walk around to see the other area of the spot. Finally, I will tell the history of the temple.
The main building of the temple was built in 1163, in the Yuan Dynasty , and has a history of more than 840 years.
Compared with other famous Confucius temples nationwide, it was built 248 years earlier than that in Beijing, and 317 years earlier than that in Qufu City, Confucius's home in east China's Shandong Province. The temple in Qufu was added to the list of the World Cultural Heritages in 1995. The Pingyao Confucius Temple has China's largest statue collection of Confucius and famous ancient Confucian scholars. Covering a total area of 40,000 square meters, the temple has 112 buildings in 16 categories. that is the history of the temple.
Please visit as you like. If you have any questions, you can ask me. That's all.
-
教師師德師風培訓方案(精選5篇)
為了確保工作或事情有序地進行,時常需要預先制定方案,方案是闡明具體行動的時間,地點,目的,預期效果,預算及方法等的企劃案。方案應該怎麼制定才好呢?下面是小編為大家整理的教師師德師風培訓方案,僅供參考,歡迎大家閲讀。教師師德師風培訓方案篇1為了全面貫徹實施《中...
-
銷售個人先進事蹟總結範文(精選5篇)
在日常生活或是工作學習中,要用到事蹟的情況還是蠻多的,事蹟可以起到宣傳典型人物、引導良好風氣的作用。什麼樣的事蹟才是規範的呢?下面是小編收集整理的銷售個人先進事蹟總結範文,歡迎大家分享。銷售個人先進事蹟總結篇1xxx,女,45歲,漢族,高中文化,從事銷售工作10年,...
-
國小師德師風心得體會(精選6篇)
有了一些收穫以後,馬上將其記錄下來,它可以幫助我們瞭解自己的這段時間的學習、工作生活狀態。那麼寫心得體會要注意的內容有什麼呢?以下是小編為大家整理的國小師德師風心得體會(精選6篇),僅供參考,希望能夠幫助到大家。國小師德師風心得體會1作為一名國小教師,我感到...
-
學生個人先進事蹟材料2000字(通用6篇)
無論是在學校還是在社會中,大家都寫過事蹟材料,肯定對各類事蹟材料都很熟悉吧,事蹟材料有兩種用途:一是宣傳典型,二是評選先進。相信很多朋友都對擬事蹟材料感到非常苦惱吧,下面是小編精心整理的學生個人先進事蹟材料2000字(通用6篇),僅供參考,希望能夠幫助到大家。學生...