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國中英語記敍文寫作示範

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在記敍文中,可以採用倒敍的寫作手法,先寫出事件的結果,再陳述過程。下面是國中英語記敍文寫作示範,為大家提供參考。

國中英語記敍文寫作示範

Sample 1 :

I have a lot of hobbies as same as others, for example: I like making friends and doing exercises as well as learning English, and so on. I think my hobbies are important not only for my study but also my life.

By making friends, we can know more people and groups outside world, just like a song says that “ you will walk more smoothly if you have more friends”.

Everyone knows that doing exercises is good for our health, and keep ourselves young and healthy, it will make us successful in our study.

Learning English is a good hobby as well, we could make more foreign friends and learn western cultures, it will open our minds in the coming future.

I am glad that I have such good hobbies, I will keep this forever.

Sample 2 :

Maybe you would like to ask me “who is your best friend?” I can tell you the answer is Jack.

Jack used to be hard-working and interested in every subject we learn at school. He is good at Chinese and English. He is friendly and he makes many foreign friends. Meanwhile he gets on well with this classmates and friends. Jack likes dancing , and drawing as well. His work has won prizes for several times. We help each other not only in the study but also in our life.

It is possible that we are going to different schools in a few months , wherever we go, I believe/am sure Jack will be my best friend forever.

國中英語作文寫作方法

要寫好作文,首先要寫好開頭,怎麼寫開頭呢?下面是一些不同的開頭表達方式,大家可以參考看看。

“開門見山”式開頭

即要用簡單明瞭的語言引出文章的話題,使人一開始就能瞭解文章要説明的內容。

①.對於敍事類的文章,可以在開頭把人物、時間、事件和環境交代清楚。

如“A Trip to Huangshan(黃山之旅)”的開頭就可以是:Last month, my family went to Huangshan by train. It took us ten hours to get there. What a long and tiring journey! We were tired but the beautiful scenery excited us.

②.對於論述性的文章,可以在開頭處先闡明自己的觀點,接着展開進一步的論述。

如“The Time and the Money(時間和金錢)”的開頭可以是:Most people say that money is more important than time. But I don’t think so. First, when money is used up, you can earn it back,but?

這樣就將自己想要談到的話題表達清楚了,接下來再繼續論述就可以了。

回憶性開頭

在描述事件或遊記類的文章中,採用回憶性的開頭往往更能吸引人的眼球。這種類型的開頭中通常含有描述自己心情或情緒的詞彙,如never forget (永遠無法忘記), remember (記得),unforgettable (難以忘懷的), exciting(令人激動的),surprising(令人驚訝的), sad (難過的)……如“A Trip to Huangshan(黃山之旅)”的開頭還可以這樣寫:I will never forget my first trip to Huangshan. 或It was really an unforgettable experience I had.

疑問性開頭

在敍事類或論述性的文章中,都可採用疑問型開頭,這樣既可以吸引閲卷者的注意又容易抓住中心。

如“Planting Trees(種樹)”的開頭可以是:Have you ever planted trees? Don’t you think planting trees is ……

再如“Traveling Abroad(出國之旅)”的開頭可以是:If you have an opportunity to travel abroad, why not consider Singapore?

倒敍式開頭

在有的文章,特別是敍事類的文章中,可以採用倒敍的寫作手法,先寫出事件的結果,再陳述過程。

如“Catching Thieves (捉賊)”的開頭可以這樣寫:I lay in bed in the hospital. I smiled at my friends even though my legs hurt. Do you want to know what happened to me? Let me tell you. It’s a … story.

倒敍式的寫法有一些難寫,並且在寫作過程中很有可能出現時態混淆的問題,在此建議大家在寫作過程中儘量不要倒敍式的方式,避免犯錯。

開了一個好頭之後,當然要開始寫文章的主體部分了,那就是文章的正文。

文章的正文應以文章的開頭為線索,具體地敍述、説明或論證文章的主題。文章不論長短,每個段落都必須為主題服務。像説明文和議論文這一類的文章,一個主題還常分成幾個小主題,每個小主題要用一個段落處理,另起一段時,應是一層新的意思。每一段的開頭,要放一個表示段落小主題的.主題句,這樣可使文章條理化,易於閲讀,便於讀者抓住主題。段內的所有句子應圍繞主題句的意義加以闡述或論證,為中心思想服務。句子之間應銜結自然,有條不紊,而且還要合乎邏輯,段落中不能出現任何與主題無關的句子;英語寫作比較重視主題句的作用,缺少它段落意義就會含糊不清。主題句也可放在段落的中間和末尾等部位,但對初學者來説,以放在段首為好。

在記敍文中,段的結構有時可以很簡單,不需要有主題句,敍事一氣呵成,中途沒有停頓。段與段之所以分開,只是為了起修辭作用,以便把某一細節置於顯著的地位。

分段是文章組織上重要的一步,在寫一篇文章的時候,一般都會將文章分為3段,第一段也就是文章的開頭,第二段是主體部分,第三段自然就是結尾了。當然也可以分成4段等,不管怎麼分段,都請大家要記住,在寫一篇作文的時候,一定不可以不分段。

接下來就是文章的結尾了,以下是一些寫好結尾的方法

1.自然結尾,點明主題。隨着文章的結束,文章自然而然地結尾。

如“Helping the Policeman(幫助警察)”的結尾可以是:The two children were praised by the police and they felt happy.

再如“The Tortoise and the Hare(龜兔賽跑)”的結尾可以是:When the hare got to the tree, the tortoise had already been there。

2.首尾呼應,昇華主題。在文章的結尾可以用含義較深的話點明主題,深化主題,起到“畫龍點睛”的效果。

如“I Love My Hometown(我愛家鄉)”的結尾可以是:I love my hometown, and I am proud of it.

3.反問結尾,引起深思。這種方式的結尾雖然形式是問句,但意義卻是肯定的,而且具有一定的強調作用,可引起他人的深思。

如 “Learning English can Give us a Lot of Pleasure (學英語能為我們帶來許多樂趣)” 的結尾可以是:If we learn English well, we can …Don’t you think learning English is great fun?

4.表達祝願,闡述願望

這種方式的結尾常出現在書信或演講稿的文體中,表示對他人的祝福或對將來的展望等。

如“A Letter to the Farmers(給農民們的一封信)”的結尾可以是:I hope the farmers’life will be better and better. 另外,書信的結尾常有以下形式的祝福語:Best wishes;I wish you a merry Christmas and a happy new year;I wish you have a good time等。

第四種方法在會考作文中並不會太常用到,會考作文一般都不會要求寫關於書信方面的文章,大家可以只是稍加了解。