英語大作文第三段寫作要素

第三段結尾部分是整篇文章的總結部分，對於全文來説有點睛和提分的作用。框架也分為負向文章行文思路與正向文章行文思路兩大類。上次和大家分享的是負向文章思路，本次卞老師給大家分析積極正面的文章行文思路。

我們先以2001年考研英語真題為例。在2001年“愛心是一盞燈，在越黑暗的地方越明亮”的.寫作題目中，範文的結束段是這樣來進行的：

It is my view that the best way to show love is to help people who are more unfortunate than we are. We should always be ready to give a helping hand to those who are in trouble, no matter whether they are family members or complete strangers. Only by doing so can we help to make the world a better place, for, as the picture shows, the darker the shadows of sorrow become, the more brightly the lamp of love shines.

這是作文的第三段。在這個段落中，作者在此明確了自己的觀點：表示愛心的最好方式是幫助比我們更加不幸的人。同時作者又給出了自己的建議，希望每個人都隨時準備向有困難的人伸出援助之手。

上面的例子是一個關於正面的話題，這是圍繞“愛心”展開的。因此，在這一段中，首先需要去弘揚這種美德，或者現象。在第三段的第一句，重申論點是非常有必要的。例如這句話“It is my view that the best way to show love is to help people who are more unfortunate than we are”，為了使我們的社會更加美好，這樣積極正面的例子是我們每一個人都要效仿並學習的。在第三段的第二句中，需要表明“當前社會的確很需要這種正能量或者這種積極正面的行為”。正如第一個例子中的這句話“we should always be ready to give a helping hand to those who are in trouble, no matter whether they are family members or complete strangers”，範文中再次表明社會中的每個人都應該隨時做好準備去幫助其他人。無論是作為我們的家人，還是陌生人，我們都不應該見他人有難而視而不見。在第三段的第三句中，文章應該“對未來的憧憬或者期待”進行表述。例如，“Only by doing so can we help to make the world a better place, for, as the picture shows, the darker the shadows of sorrow become, the more brightly the lamp of love shines”，針對這種正面行為或現象，如果一直保持着這種正能量，社會將會變得更美好，愛心的光將照亮悲傷的陰影。

下面卞老師給大家總結一下積極正向文章整體的寫作思路。

正向文章行文思路 (積極倡導)：

( Confidence ) is partially the driving force behind the evolution/growth of our society. And all hands are supposed to join together to (foster people’s confidence).

　　社會層面

(1)媒體傳遞正能量media

The mass media should exert more positive energy, such as being confidence, to the public so that people would react more positively to difficulties and adversities.

(2)教育education

Education, affects people’s attitude and reaction to the world. Thus, moral education should be enhanced and concentrated on juveniles and kids before they enter their adulthood. Specifically, self-discipline and code of social conduct should be written in books and carefully discussed in class.

(3)學校college

College is where undergraduates obtain knowledge and skills to enhance their academic performance and where students get their personality and code of social conduct improved as well. Thus, moral course of moral education should be provided as elective curriculums to college students.

curriculum 校內課程

extra curriculum課外活動

electives n選修課 elective curriculums