英語作文中的五個萬用套路

　　1. 矇混式

I prefer my English classes to be taught in both English and chinese.

If in English only in the class, of couse, can be help students rase up listening and speaking and so on, also can be help students themselves loudly speaking, and very care of listening, but only not good place, carry about students doesn’t know means of teacher,

lead to some students don’t more and more listening in the class. in my opion, don’t like in English only.

In both English and chinese can be more and more know teacher speaking, but atmosphere of English don’t nel, students think of English as if chinese class not new means.

I think of, only students listening, speaking and so on, Everyone can be use of it, but I like in both English and chinese, became can be rase of my English (141- 128 ws) (4)

文章特徵：字數貌似充足，分段幾乎不可挑剔，但除了抄寫題目，沒有一句是完整的.英語句子，全是瞎扯。

　　2.套路式

I prefer my English classes to be taught in both English and chinese.

As far as I am concerned, taught in both English and chinese could improve our understood. some students were not good at English. if teacher taught in English only. Not only they Couldn’t interested in English. but also could give up it. but in both English and chinese. Could made us more easy to understand. and it was a right way for us fond of English.

However, if we only taught in English. at the class, English atmosphere Couldn’t very enthusiastic maybe would take some troubles for English teacher.

In my opinion. I still prefer in both English and chinese. Though In English only could improve English listen ability. Nevertheless If you study hard you could still good at English, because no pains no gains. and we should take care of others who weren’t good at English. So let’s us learn English both English and chinese. (159-146 ws) (12)

短評：套路有三，抄題目，此其一;背語篇標記和套話(如every coin has two sides, etc.)，此其二;重複口頭禪，此其三。幾乎沒有自己的思想，就是有也是充滿語用失誤

　　3.套路式加中文式

I prefer my English classes to be taught in both English and Chinese.

As the saying goes, every coin has two sides. There are both advantages and disadvantages in the way of teaching in both English and Chinese. The advantage is that it’ll be more convenient for students to understand the meaning of English sentences, which can get teacher’s messages across to student more easily. However, there is a disadvantage that a good atmosphere for English study may not be created. Besides, teaching in this way can always easily lead students to write English sentences in their Chinese way, which has been a usual mistake for students.

Although there are many disadvantages in teaching in both English and Chinese, we can’t forget its advantages. Personally I believe it is suitable for we Chinese students. It is more acceptical and has a better effect on the progress of students’ English, after all. So let’s stick to it.(156ws)(18)

短評：有點水平，套路有所變化和發展，主要方法是：一抄，二套，三結合。中文式英語，思維矛盾。但從語法上看，句子基本規範，很少語言錯誤。

　　4. 複合式

I prefer my English classes to be taught in English. Being taught in English has a lot of advantages. For one thing, it can improve our abilities of listening to and speaking English. For another thing, the atmosphere which it forms is so perfect that we can devote ourselves to learning English. What’s more, the netmunication between we and teachers in English will benete more and more often.

However, it has also some disadvantages. For example, we sometimes have difficulties understanding what teachers said. In addition, some students who have a bad English spoken don’t dare to speak English loudly in class.

Even though it has disadvantages, I still hold my opinion. As far as I can see, being taught in English makes contribution to learning English to us. (129ws) (20)

短評：本文是抄、套、中文式英語的大雜燴。抄17個詞，套32個詞，26個詞為中式英語(不顧英語語法和搭配習慣)

　　5.地道式

I prefer my English classes to be taught in both English and Chinese. In my opinion, learning English is a step-by-step process. As middle school students, we only have a small vocabulary. If the teacher can use some Chinese in an English class, we will understand the lesson better.

Of course, an English class taught in two languages has its shortnetings. Such a class cannot create a good atmosphere for English learning. Some students will speak Chinese all the time and cannot learn English well.

If you want to learn a learn well, you have to understand it first. To help students understand the lesson better, the teacher should use Chinese from time to time. Therefore, I like my teacher to use both English and Chinese in teaching. (128ws)

短評

第一段：一個觀點，一條思路：主題句(觀點)，第一段正文(思路)：大理由(learning is a slow process);小理由(中學生詞彙量少);結論：用點中文能幫助學生理解課堂內容。

第二段：主題(不足之處);具體方面：1)不利營造氛圍;2)學生習慣説母語，不利於學英語。

第三段：全文結論照應第一段內容。