2016年12月英語四級作文範文及點評

四六級總分為710分，作文分值比例為：15%，即作文106.5分。所以，作文還是很重要的。以下是yjbys網小編整理的關於英語四級作文範文及點評，供大家備考。

篇一：Haste Makes Waste

The Proverb “Haste makes waste” has been widely accepted for many years. It reminds us that if we are to achieve our final goal we have to do it in a (1)down-to-earth way. (2)The truth of it is deep and profound.

(3)There are numerous examples supporting this argument. (4)A case in point is the ancient Chinese story of (5)“Helping the shoots grow by pulling”. This story proved that the haste caused not only waste but great loss. (6)For another example, some parents and teachers,(7①) in order to improve children’s academic performance in a short time, tend to put too heavy burden on children. This, (7②) as a result, brings the children(8) nothing but great pressure.

(9)All the above-mentioned tells us that we shouldn’t(10) be over anxious for quick results. Everything has its own (11)developing law. Therefore, (12)whatever we do, we should not pay too much attention to the speed and ignore these laws. 點評

(1)意為“腳踏實地”。

(2)意為“其中藴涵着深遠的道理”

(3)用於引出例證。

(4)意為“典型的例子”。

(5)引用“拔苗助長”的故事

(6)用於引出另外的例子

(7)插入語

(8)意為“只是，僅僅”。

(9)常用於得出結論

(10)意為“急於求成”。

(11)意為“發展規律”。

(12)引導讓步狀語從句，意為“無論什麼”。

　　篇二：

Nowadays, (1)different people hold different views about whether or not one should expect a reward when doing a good deed. Some people think that a good deed should be given a certain reward. They say it is agreeable with the rule of fairness. (2①)Also, rewards can stimulate people’s enthusiasm to do good deeds.

(3)However, there are many others who take Leifeng as a model and be always ready to help others without expecting any reward. Everyone may be in trouble.(5)Only if you help others unselfishly, you can get others’ help when you need it. (2②)Besides, they maintain that one can enjoy happiness in doing good deeds, (6)they think, (7)which is the best return.

(8)Weighing up these tow arguments, I prefer the second one. (2③)First, being happy to help others is one of Chinese people’s traditional virtues.(2④) Second, this virtue(9) is of more significance for the creation of a harmonious society. (2⑤)To conclude, (10①)it is every citizen’s responsibility(10②)to do good deeds without expecting any reward.

點評

(1)用於引出對某事物的`不同觀點。

(2)銜接詞語使文章條例清晰、意思連貫。

(3)轉折出另一種觀點。

(4)意為“不期望任何火爆”，介詞短語充當狀語，注意此處without的用法。

(5)意為“只要”，引導條件狀語從句。

(6)插入語。

(7)which引導非限制性定於從句。

(8)用於引出個人觀點，weigh up意為“權衡”。

(9)“be of +n.”相當於“be+ adj.”。

(10)固定句式：It sb.+ to do sth.其中it是形式主語，不定式短語是實際的主語。