2017年小升中英語作文及點評(7篇)

小升中的壓力始終貫穿於六年級的學習生活，為了成功升學，準備好每一門科目的考驗勢在必行!本文是本站小編搜索整理的7篇2017年小升中英語作文及點評，供參考閲讀，希望對大家有所幫助!想了解更多相關信息請持續關注我們應屆畢業生考試網!

　　小升中英語作文及點評：A Farewell Party

It’s the end of the school year. The students in Class Three have a farewell party. They invite their parents to the party. Many students have performance at the party.

Look! Chen Jie is singing songs. Zhang Peng is playing the piano. Sarah is playing the erhu. Mike is doing Chinese Kung fu. What is Miss White doing? She is dancing.

Everybody has a lot of fun. But Liu Yun isn’t here. She has a cold. She is at home. The classmates are going to visit her after party. They prepare many gifts fot her. And they will take a picture together.

　　點評：

寫法：這篇習作記敍了一個告別晚會。記敍了學年末的告別晚會上大家都表演了什麼節目，以及晚會後大家要去看望劉芸的故事。

時態：這篇習作可採用三種時態來寫。由於本單元主要出現的時態是一般將來時和現在進行時，所以這裏我們才用一般現在時，現在進行時和一般將來時來寫。

　　句型：

一般現在時：主語+動詞原形+其他。

現在進行時：主語+現在分詞+其他。

一般將來時：主語+ be going to / will +動詞原形+其他。

注意：由於本篇文章中所涉及的時態比較多，所以要注意一下時態的變化。學生們都在表演什麼節目可以用現在進行時，將要去做什麼，要用將來時。另外還要注意，一般現在時在肯定句中，主語是第三人稱單數，謂語動詞也要用第三人稱單數。

　　小升中英語作文及點評：A Post Card from John

Dear Sarah,

This post card shows you a picture from my holiday. We got Kunming on Wednesday. On the first day we visited Stone Forest. It’s very beautiful. I love it very much. On Thursday Kathy and I got lost in the city. We asked a policeman for help. He helped us find the hotel. On Friday we went to a small village. We saw folk dances and ate some fresh vegetables from the farm. We enjoyed ourselves. Last day we went shopping ane bought some presents for friends. Tomorrow we will be back home.

John

　　【要領點評】

寫法：這是一封明信片，按照時間順序記敍了約翰假期去昆明度假這幾天的活動。分別記敍了遊覽石林，迷路，看民族舞，購物，買禮物等活動。

時態：這篇文章由於是記敍已經發過的事，所以大部分可以採用一般過去時來寫。

句型：主語+動詞過去式+其他。

注意：描述已經發生過的事要用一般過去時，在寫這篇文章的時候要注意動詞的過去式的'變化，尤其是動詞過去式的不規則變化。沒發生過的事要用一般將來時。

　　小升中英語作文及點評：Tom’s Holiday

Tom went to Beijing by plane on his holiday. Every day he had fun with his parents. They went to the Nature Park. They saw elephants. They went swimming. They ate lots of delicious food. They also took many beautiful pictures. They will come back home tomorrow. In a word, they enjoy their holiday.

　　【要領點評】

寫法：這篇習作是按照地點的順序記敍假期裏的活動，記敍了假期裏去北京做了哪些活動以及對活動的感受。

時態：這篇文章可採用兩種時態來寫。由於本單元主要講述的是一般過去時的用法，所以這裏大部分我們採用一般過去時比較合適。

句型：主語+動詞過去式+其他?? 主語+will+動詞原形+其他

注意：活動的相關表達法可採用舊知識和新知識相結合去寫，但要注意動詞過去式的變化規則。例：eat 的過去式為ate，為不規則變化。

　　小升中英語作文及點評：Zoom’s Weekend

Zoom had a busy weekend. On Saturday morning, he washed his clothes and went to a park. He did his homework and went fishing on Saturday afternoon. On Sunday morning, he cleaned his room and visited his grandparents. He played football and watch TV on Sunday afternoon. Zoom was too tired.

　　【要領點評】

寫法：這篇習作是按時間順序記敍了Zoom的週末活動。

時態：這篇文章可以用三種時態來寫，由於本單元主要講的是一般過去時態，所以我們採用一般過去時態比較合適。

句型：主語+動詞過去式+過去時間。

注意：活動的相關表達法採用新舊知識結合的方法，但要注意動詞過去式的拼寫。

　　小升中英語作文及點評：A Bad Cold

I’m not feeling well today. I think I have a bad cold. I have a headache. I have a fever. My nose hurts. My throat is sore. I have to take some medicine and stay in bed. My parents will take me to the hospital. What a bad cold!

I hope I can be better soon. And I want to go to school.

　　【要領點評】

寫法：這篇習作是按照時間順序記敍了得病、病的症狀、服藥及治療的全過程。寫出了小作者希望快點康復，好去上學的願望。

時態：這篇文章可以採用一般現在時來寫。如果主語是第三人稱單數，動詞別忘加s。 句型：要用feel 加形容詞，和表示“患某種疾病“的用法have+表示的疾病的單詞。

注意：在表示疾病時，可以使用-ache,hurt 和sore。不要只用一個單詞，以避免枯燥。要寫出得病後的簡單治療及心情，不能只寫得病的情況。常見病句：My nose is hurt。因為be後面要加形容詞，而hurt是動詞，因此應使用sore;東西放在牀上要用on the bed。生病，是卧牀不起，應該説stay in bed。 表示吃藥時，通過用take some medicine，不用eat。 詞彙量要控制在40~60之間。

　　小升中英語作文及點評：My friend and I

I’ve got a lovely friend at school. His name is Jack. Jack is 12 years old now. I’m 11. He’s older than me. He’s 150 cm tall. I’m 148 cm. He’s taller and stronger. He’s 43 kg and I’m 41 kg. He’s heavier. We’ve got round faces and short hair. But my eyes are bigger and my legs are longer. Our favourite colours are white and blue. We like summer best. We both like sports, too. On Saturdays, we play table tennis. On Sundays, we play basketball. He’s good at basketball. But I do better at table tennis. We laugh and play together. How happy we are!

　　【要領點評】

寫法：這篇作文的題目是“我的朋友和我”。既然寫作範圍是兩個人物，就要筆墨均勻，兩者缺一不可。不能只描寫朋友，也不能只敍述我。這無形中增加了寫作的難度。解決這個難點的關鍵是：找出兩個人幾方面的異同。可以通過常見的年齡、身高、體重、外貌、喜好等方面列舉出每個人的具體實際情況，再進行比較，通過比較突出每個人物的特點。這樣就把人物活靈活現的展現給讀者了。 時態：像此類題目的作文，運用一般現在時即可。

句型：因為涉及兩個人的比較，不要忘記使用比較級句型：A+be+比較級+than+B。

注意：在列舉兩個人的“體貌、喜好”等方面情況時，應一邊列舉，一邊比較。不要一味指出不同，還要列舉相同之處。兩人能成為朋友，一定有共同語言和喜好，共性不容忽視。在表達喜好時，不同的句型應交叉運用，避免枯燥的重複。例“Our favourite colours are?”，“We like ?best”，“We both like?,too”，為突出不同時間做不同運動，用“On Saturdays?”，“On Sundays?”，形成鮮明對比。常使用並列連詞and 和轉折連詞 but ，使文章讀起來更流暢。結尾以How happy we are!突出了兩人從友誼中得到的快樂!

　　小升中英語作文及點評：Let’s have a nice day

It’s Sunday tomorrow .I’m going to the bookstore with my friends tomorrow morning are going to look for some good books all like reading books are going to eat our lunch at the restaurant. I like chicken, beef and vegetables r lunch, we are going to the Summer Palace by bus. We are going to play near the Kunming Lake. Maybe we are going to row a boat on the lake , that will be relaxing. We are coming back at 5pm.

　　【要領點評】

怎樣才稱得上是“美好的一天”?有兩點不能忘記，一是安排得充實，二是安排得有意義。這兩點小作者無疑都想到了，上午去書店看書買書，中午在飯店吃飯，下午去頤和園玩耍、划船，豐富多彩!文章以時間為線索，敍述清楚，文筆也很優美。

小朋友們在寫這種敍事的文章時，要儘量給讀者交代好時間、地點、人物和活動等，使文章有血有肉。要看好是寫過去發生的事情，還是現在正在做的事情，或計劃、打算要做的事情，以選擇適當的句型。如果是寫將來的事情，那麼就要注意在表述時多用“be going to+動詞原形”這種句型。還有一點也很重要，那就是故事的線索要交代好，讓讀者在閲讀時對整個過程一目瞭然。