考研英語寫作真題分析

uppose you won a translation contest and your friend Jack wrote an email to congratulate you, and ask advice on translation. Write him a reply to

1)thank him;

2)give your advice.

You should write neatly on the ANWSER SHEET. Do not sign you own name at the end of the letter, use “Li Ming ” instead. Do not write the address .(10 point)

如大家所見，這是2016年英語二小作文題目。英語（二）考綱的寫作部分，其實主要考查學生的應用能力，考查範圍包括私人和公務信函、備忘錄、報告等，還應能寫一般描述性、敍述性和説明或議論性的文章；而要求考生根據所給情景寫出一篇約100詞（標點符號不計算在內）的應用性短文。

作為寫作B部分的小作文總分10分，大家要抓住得分點。小作文在評分時有如下評分要點：1.信息點——覆蓋全面；2.內容——組織連貫；3.語言——準確性；4.格式——符合要求；5.語域——恰當。

不出所料，今年英語二的小作文再次考查了書信體，並且考查的信件可以説是雜糅型的。這在2011年英語二中出現了同樣的考查方式：

Suppose your cousin LI MING has just been admited to a university write him/her a letter to：

（1）Congratulate him/her，and

（2）give him/her suggestions on how to get prepared for university life

You should write about 100 words on ANSWER SHEET 2. DO not sign your own name at the end of the letter，Use zhangwei.

同樣的考查方式，足以説明一件事情——絕對要重視考研真題。我們總在強調真題的重要性，希望大家以後一定要強化這種認識。

下面我們來詳細解讀下今年的小作文，首先看一下題目要求：

稱呼：Dear Jack注意稱呼中，後面的逗號不可丟，也不能寫成冒號。

正文

建議大家三步走策略——簡潔、直接、明瞭：寫作目的、寫作是由、重申目的.

第一段：寫作內容需涵蓋兩點：寫信目的，表明感謝來自朋友的祝賀；可以採用這樣的表達方式：I’m writing to express my gratitude for your congratulation on my success in the translation contest.

第二段：寫作內容應以建議為主體。在這個過程中可以把日常我們如何提高的方式寫進正文，如講究學習方式、注重堅持、多多接觸外文文化及語境。那本篇老師主要從前兩個方面進行論述，表達如下：As regard to my experience, I would like to offer you some proposals in this part. At the top of list is the persistence due to the fact that you could deserve the position after days or years of efforts that you have had in the field. What’s more, you are supposed to pay more attention to the way in which you finish your major, for it plays a significant role in the process.

第三段：再次強調重申寫信目的，如Thanks again and I do hope that my suggestions can be in favor of your future study.

落款：Yours sincerely,特別提醒sincerely後面逗號不能丟；簽名：Li Ming特別注意Ming後面一定不能出現句點。

整體成文如下：

Dear Jack,

I’m writing to express my gratitude for your congratulation on my success in the translation contest.

As regard to my experience, I would like to offer you some proposals in this part. At the top of list is the persistence due to the fact that you could deserve the position after days or years of efforts that you have had in the field. What’s more, you are supposed to pay more attention to the way in which you finish your major, for it plays a significant role in the process.

Thanks again and I do hope that my suggestions can be in favor of your future study.

Sincerely yours,

Li Ming

來這裏，突破複試最後一道防線！