滿分四六級作文:新概念背出來的

很多學員通過自學，或者跟着老師學習新概念英語學了好久，就是找不到提高英語的真正法則。新概念英語的妙處不是三言兩語可以表述清楚，今天，就用新概念三冊裏的部分句子來演繹一篇滿分六級作文。

首先展示的是八句新三的句子，當把這些句子背誦完了以後，就可以仿照類似的結構寫一篇滿分文章。

L-45-11:

As the parents had five children, life was a perpetual struggle against poverty. They were expecting their sixth child and were faced with even more pressing economic problems. If they had only had one child, the fact would have passed unnoticed.

家裏已有五個孩子，全家人常年在貧困中掙扎。第六個孩子即將問世，他們面臨着更加嚴峻的經濟問題。如果他們只是再得一個孩子的話，這件事情也會悄無聲息地過去的。 L-38-13:

Historians have long been puzzled by dots, lines and symbols.

歷史學家一直被一些點，線和符號感到困惑不解。 L4-7

I used to work as a dustman in NOS.

我在新東方任清潔工一職。

L41-11

My friend fails to mention the long and friendless winter evenings in front of the TV---virtually the only form of entertainment.

我的朋友沒有提到在電視機前度過漫長而寂寞的冬夜——電視幾乎是唯一的娛樂形式。 L33-10

As if this were not enough to reduce you to tears, your husband arrives.

如果這還不足以讓你掉眼淚，你老公又回來了。

L12-12

There were hardly any trees on the island and there was no water, but this did not prove to be a problem.

島上幾乎沒有樹和水，但這並不是個問題。 L2-1

Our vicar is always raising money for one cause or another, but he has never managed to get enough money to have the church clock repaired.

我們的牧師總是為這事、那事籌集資金，但始終未能籌足資金把教堂的鐘修好。 L59-15

As she is not rich, the chances that she will be able to afford such purchases are remote.

由於她並不富裕，所以她買得起這些東西的可能性極小。

下面是2005年1月的六級考試作文題目，經過仔細分析，我們可以把文章寫成如下的結構，後面是參考譯文。受篇幅影響，就沒有一一去分析寫作的思路，但是文章中的好多巨型結構都是上面八句英文句子的翻版。

2005.1 CET-6 Writing:

1. 對病人的簡單介紹：目前的病情和家庭情況

2.目前的困難：無法繼續承擔醫療費用，需要護理

3.希望捐助，聯繫方式

Dear friends,

Here is a story of an unfortunate boy.

Jack, an undergraduate of English College, has long been assailed by grave disease. He was born in a miserable family where life is a perpetual struggle against poverty. His father works as a dustman with narrow wages, virtually the only source of income of the family. Life is wretched indeed. As if this were not enough to reduce them to tears, the father had his both legs broken some time ago The loss of job makes the whole family faced with even more economic odds. Normal living proves to be a problem, not to mention the huge sums of medical expenses. Chances that he will be fully recovered are remote considering the lack of money

So, we shouldn’t let the misfortune pass unnoticed. On behalf of the student union, I would like to ask for your help. Your kindness and generosity will put the family out of trouble. Whoever will make donations is requested to dial 010-62605000

Profound thanks from,

Student Union

朋友們：

下面是一則有關一個不幸男孩的故事：

Jack是一個英語學院的本科生，一直被嚴重的疾病折磨着。他出生在一個悽慘的家庭，長年生活拮据。他爸爸是個清潔工，掙錢很少而且是家庭收入的唯一來源。生活確實很慘。如果這還不足以使他們掉眼淚的話，他爸爸在前段時間又摔傷了腿。失業使得整個家庭的生活更加困難。正常的`生活都還是個問題，更別提高昂的醫療費用了。所以他痊癒的可能性太渺茫了。考慮到沒錢，他痊癒的可能性太渺茫了。

因此，我們不能讓這樣的不幸就悄無聲息地過去了。我要代表學生會，請求大家伸出援助之手。你的善良和解囊將使這個家庭擺脱困難。若要捐助，請撥：010—62605000。

非常感謝！

學生會仔細揣摩上面的文章，同學們不難發現，通過背誦新概念三冊裏的黃金句型，可以非常好地指導各位在四、六級的作文考試。所以，新概念英語的學習，務必要在專業老師的指導下，詳細講解新概念的每個句子的特點和使用方向，這樣才能真正意義上學出新概念的精髓，看到這本世紀經典教材背後的美麗。