精彩的焰火大學英語作文
the week long national day holiday which started from oct. i has become not only an occasion for celebrating the birth of the nation but also a time for people to rela. after all, under great pressure every day, everyone longs to slow down and rediscover the real fun of life.
my only hope for the week long holiday was also to rela myself well, instead of playing well. i slept until the sun was shinning above, ate my favorite food which i scarcely have because of their high calorie, and enjoyed different kinds of films from day to night.
usually, i seldom went out during the holidays, as it was too terrible to battle the national day holiday crowds. but this time, i couldn't resist myself against the performance of music fireworks whose theme was "all colors of music".
as a part of the international music fireworks festival, the performance of music fireworks, designed by the swedish artists, was staged at century park in pudong on the night of october 3.
the scene, a spectacular combination of fireworks eploding in harmony with the music, made powerful visual and audio impact on me. the artists selected for the performance various pieces of music, including classical music by beethoven and strauss, some representative popular compositions such as "my heart will go on". with the music, the fireworks were set off in different formations. i could admire the fireworks in the sky as well as their reflections in the water.
arising from the river surface to the height of 300 meters in the sky, multi-layered and rich colored fireworks formulated an etremely spectacular picture. one of the most eye catchers was that nearly 1000 sparkling pieces of fireworks along the surface of the water formed a red carpet with 80 meters long and 250 meters wide. at the same time, a 10 meter-high waterfall firework rushed downwards the bridge across jingtian lake and simultaneously the red lantern shaped fireworks filled the sky. it really took me on a romantic tour as the fireworks eplode.
wish for net chance to see such kind of music fireworks again!
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這是一篇記敍文。記敍文的寫作,首先當然要注意時間順序,這一點容易做到。不容易做到的是詳略得當、主次分明、中心突出。而這正是這篇文章做得比較好的地方。國慶是歡樂的時候、休閒的時候、放鬆的時候。這位同學寫國慶沒有面面俱到,而是選取其中印象最深的音樂焰火來寫,將其中焰火燃放的場面寫得比較詳細。看過煙火的`人都知道,這種場面看起來壯觀精彩,寫起來卻很不容易。一是同學熟悉議論文的寫作,場面描寫卻是軟肋;二是這種壯觀的場面太難以捉摸了。這篇文章在這一塊着墨不多,描寫也難説精彩,但總算是一個良好的開始。
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