英語六級作文範文精講：我的夢想

　　my dream

everyone has a lot of dreams . some people want to be rich , dreaming of becoming millionaires overnight . othe rs want to be famous , dreaming of suddenly jumping to gr eat fame . i have a lot of dr eams , too . when i was a young gir l , i dreamed of becoming a scientist like hua luogen in future . howeve r , i k new ve ry well tha t i could not succeed without painstaking effor ts . so i studied ha rd in the middle school and college in order to at tain my goal .

after graduating from college , i found a job as a teache r . although i was very busy with teaching , i never gave up my goal . i read a lot of books to get more knowledge . i made experiments to pr actise and apply what i had lea rnt f rom the book s . sometimes , i was so deeply indulged in my resea rch that i forgot my meals and time . now i have made gr ea t progress . sever al of my r esea rch pape rs have been published . the methods proposed in my papers have been proven to be valuable for the solution of some problems . i am very happy . the ladde r of becoming a scientist is still far ahead , but i have climbed the first rung anyway .

　　cet6六級作文結構分析：

·everybody has a lot of dreams

* some people’s dreams

* other people’s dreams

* my dream

· how i realize my dream

* study hard

* work hard

* achievements so far made

* a long way to go

　　cet6六級作文內容分析：

本文為一篇記敍文。文中第一段為夾敍夾議, 以general comment 開頭, 引出“我的夢想”。第二段為作者為實現夢想所做的努力和取得的成果, 最後一句“成為科學家的階梯還遙遙在上, 但我至少已攀登了第一級。”既是總結又是方向。此句摹仿了jack london 的`散文“what life mean s to me”中的一句精彩句子。

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　　cet6六級作文萬能句型：

dream of 夢想

jump to great fame 一舉成名

be indulged in . . . 沉緬於

propose v . 提出

ladde r n . 梯子

rung n . (梯子的)級