2017年雅思流程圖小作文範文

　　優秀範文賞析(一)：

　　How to make chocolate

The diagram shows the stages in the process ofmaking chocolate.

【所有的'小作文第一句話都要用一般現在時。流程圖必備三個詞：process：整個過程, stage：階段，step：步驟】

Chocolatecomesfrom the cacao tree, which is grown in parts of SouthAmerica, Africa and Indonesia.

【開頭不能衝上來就直接介紹cacaotree，而是通過主題詞chocolate引出，否則顯得太唐突】The tree produces large red pods which contain whitecocoa beans. Firstly, when the pods are ripe,they areharvested, the beans are removed and they are fermented for several days inlarge wooden boxes.

【三個句子的並列：“句子A，句子B and句子C”。】

During the fermenting process, the beans turn brown.

【流程圖特點之五：要適當地添加個別圖中沒有交代但能從圖片中直接讀出來的的一些內容，否則可能達不到字數要求。但是一定要把握尺度，千萬不要加上自己的主觀觀點，否則會扣分】

Next,the brown beans are spread in the sun to dry. They arethen put in large sacks and transported by train or lorry. After this, the beans are taken toa chocolate factory where they are roasted in an oven at temperatures ofbetween 250 and 350 degree Celsius.

After beingroasted, the beans are crushed and the outer shell is removed. This part is notneeded for making chocolate. Finally, the inner part of the bean is pressedand liquid chocolate is produced.

　　優秀範文賞析(二)：

　　Brick manufacturing

*Clay: type of sticky earth that is used for makingbricks, pots, etc.

　　【滿分範文】

The process by whichbricks are manufactured for the building industry can be outlined in sevenconsecutive steps. First the raw material, clay, which was just below thesurface of soil in certain clay-rich areas has to be dug up by a digger.

Then the lumps of clayare placed on a metal grid in order to break up the big chunks of clay intomuch smaller areas, which fall through the metal grid onto a roller, whosemotion further segregates the bits of clay. Sand and water are added to make ahomogenous mixture, which is then either formed in moulds or cut intobrick-shaped pieces by means of a wire cutter.

Those fresh bricks arethen kept in a drying oven for at least 24 and a maximum of 48 hours, severaldozens if not hundreds of bricks at a time. The dried bricks are thentransferred to a so-called kiln, another type of high temperature oven. Firstthey are kept at a moderate temperature of 200 ℃-1300℃. This process is followed by cooling downthe finished bricks for 48 to 72 hours in a cooling chamber.

Once thebricks have cooled down and have become hard, they get packaged and deliveredto their final destination, be it a building site or storage.

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