雅思作文指導:如何使句子多樣化
句子可長可短,同一件事,可以用不同的句式表達。如果句子清一色是簡單句,文章必定很單調乏味。如果全篇充滿了冗長的'複雜句,讀起來也很費力。最好的方法是以簡單句為基礎,配合適當的並列句和複雜句。簡單句可長可短,通常要加些附屬成分,如分詞短語、介詞短語、副詞短語、不定式動詞短語,以及節縮成分。
總之,可根據情況,使句子多樣化,使文章靈活多姿。例如下列五個句子的基本概念一樣,但是句式不同,內容重點也有些差別:
(1) The goats grazed peacefully in the farm and were unaware of the approaching hunter. (並列分句(1)+2)
(2) Grazing peacefully, the goats in the farm were unaware of the approaching hunter. (現在分語短語+簡單句)
(3) In the farm, the goats grazed peacefully and were unaware of the approaching hunter. (副詞短語+並列分句(1)-(2) )
(4) There were goats grazing peacefully in the farm, unaware of the approaching hunter. (簡單句+形容語短語)
(5) As the goats grazed peacefully in the farm, they were unaware of the approaching hunter. (原因副詞從句+主句)
(1)和(5)的句式最常見;如果加上其他三種互相交替,句子不是更多樣化嗎?
最後,看看這兩個句子要怎樣多樣化呢?
(6) The young pilot was on his first overseas training.
(7) He felt very uneasy.
(a) The young pilot on his first overseas training felt very uneasy.
(b) The young pilot felt very uneasy during his first overseas training.
(c) The young pilot''''''''s first overseas training made him feel very uneasy.
(d) Extreme uneasiness seized the young pilot on his first overseas training.
(e) The young pilot was on his first overseas training, feeling very uneasy.
(f) It being his first overseas training, the young pilot felt very uneasy.
(g) Being on his first overseas training, the young pilot felt very uneasy.
-
計算機Dreamwaver使用教程:本地站點的搭建與管理
導語:要製作一個能夠被大家瀏覽的網站,首先需要在本地磁碟上製作這個網站,然後把這個網站傳到網際網路的web伺服器上。放置在本地磁碟上的網站被稱為本地站點,位於網際網路web伺服器裡的網站被稱為遠端站點。Dreamweaver8提供了對本地站點和遠端站點強大的管理功能。1...
-
2017職稱計算機考試photoshop全真模擬習題
職稱考試中Photoshop軟體的操作使用是我們需要掌握的一項基本能力,下面是小編給大家提供的職稱計算機考試photoshop全真模擬習題,大家可以參考練習,更多習題練習請關注應屆畢業生考試網。1.如何移動一條參考線:A.選擇移動工具拖拉B.無論當前使用何種工具,按住Alt鍵...
-
中級經濟師《經濟基礎》知識:經濟增長和經濟發展理論
導語:經濟發展理論經濟發展理論:是研究在經濟增長基礎上,一個國家經濟與社會結構現代化演進過程的理論。下面我們一起來看看在中級經濟師考試中的相關內容吧。1、經濟增長含義:經濟增長是指一個國家或地區在一定時期內的總產出與前期相比所實現的增長。總產出通常...
-
2016年中級經濟師《保險經濟》第七章模擬題
2016年中級經濟師考試時間為十一月五號,考試就快來臨,以下是本站小編精心為大家整理的2016年中級經濟師《保險經濟》第七章模擬題,供參考學習,希望對大家有所幫助!想了解更多相關資訊請持續關注我們應屆畢業生考試網!第七章工程保險一、單項選擇題1.在全部承包方式...