高中英語作文講解

高一英語作文我們可以靠平時多寫來提高，但是我們寫了文章不知道錯在哪裏，好在哪裏我們怎樣提高呢，這就需要我們對你的作文進行點評，找你的老師讓她們來評價一下，下面的高一英語作文講解就是對一位考生的作文進行了點評，我們來看看。

My last weekend

I had a good weekend.

On Saturday morning,I did my homework and studied Sauurday (Saturday)afternoon, I played

the volleyball with my friends. It was a little difficult (After that, I was a little tired.) the night(in the evening),I watched tv(TV) and

played(played some games. play一般不單獨使用。) .

On Sunday morning,I went to the library,I read a(an) interested(interesting) book. On Sund(Sunday) afternoon(,)

I went shopping. On Sungay night(Sunday evening) , I cleaned my room.

—、書信寫作要求

書信(Letter)一般可分為事務信件或公函(BusineLetter or Offical Correspondence)以及私人信件

(Private Letter)兩大類。一般包括以下幾個要點：

1) 收信人的姓名和地址;

2) 寄信人的姓名及其與收信人的.關係;

3) 寄信人的地址(有時可以省略);

4) 寫信的時間;

5) 信的內容。

1. 書信的格式

1) 信頭(Heading);

2) 稱呼(Salutation);

3) 正代(Body of the letter);

4) 結束語(Complimentary close);

5) 簽名(signature)。

2. 書信的種類

1) 邀請信

邀請信有正式和非正式之分，也有介於兩者之間者。正式邀請信一般屬於公函類，私人邀請信一般屬於非正式代體。邀請朋友、熟人蔘加某一聚會時，再詞句上不一定多加斟酌，用詞太正規倒顯得關係不密切。但是如果與被邀請人不太熟悉的話，最好用正式代體。如雖認識但並不十分了解，代體可介於兩個者之間。由此可見，私人邀請究竟用什麼代體，關鍵看與被邀請人之間的親疏的程度。邀請信要明確寫出活動(是晚會、晚餐還是一般的聚會等)、活動的時間地點組織這項活動的理由，有時還應告訴對方可能出席的人，另外一般希望對方給予答覆。

(1) 非正式邀請信，如;

26 Coventry St.

London

Sept. 15th, 1999.

Dear Jack,

I am going to the cinema to see the Red River Valley and I have two tickets. Would you like to come? The film starts at 7:30 p.m. Maybe we can meet at the Covent Garden Station at 7:00 p.m. and have a drink before the film starts. Please phone me at home to let me know.

Looking forward to seeing you.

Love

Mary

這封信是寫給朋友的，所以用語比較隨便，比較口語化。

(2) 正式邀請信，如：

Dear Ms. Gupta;

It’s our great pleasure to announce that Jan. 19th is the 3rd anniversary of the founding of our corporation. We have a small party as follows: 7:00p.m.,Jan. 19th, Room No.123, Kunlun Hotel. At this moment, we would like to expreour sincere gratitude to our clients for both courtesy and support over the past three years. Please confirm if you plant to attend.

Yours Sincerely,

Lewis

這是一封正式邀請信，十分正規，無論從句式，還是用語都十分講究。

(3) 介於正式和非正式之間的邀請信，如：

No.4 Middle School

Beijing 100034

April 29th,2000

Dear MiKatherine,

I am very pleased to write to you. My name is Yu Hong and I am monitor of ClaOne, Grade Three of the No.2 Middle School of Ji'nan. Last year, you came here to give a speech, which was "Fast Reading". My classmates and I all thank you very much. We will have an English evening at 7:00--9:00 on the evening of May 4th in our classroom. Would you please come and attend the evening party? At the party, we will sing English songs, play games and so on. And we are anxious to invite you to come to sing us an English song. After that we can enjoy the music. We hope to see you soon.

Yours

Yu Hong

這封信是寫給一位外籍教師的，這位外籍教師曾經到過這所學校，雖然作者認識，但並不十分了解。

2)感謝信

感謝信可分為感謝饋贈、感謝款待、感謝幫助、感謝送行和感謝探病等。

感謝信一般包括以下幾點：

①對收信人的稱謂;

②寫信的目的;(Thank you for…)

③致謝並詳述所收到的禮物或得到的幫助等;

④結尾及謙稱。

如：

Dear Ms. Gupta:

How regretful I must leave you house. Thank you for the many good things you provided. The chegame, tennis match and Mr. Gupta's delicious dishes gave me lots of enjoyment. If you came to Beijing for any reason, please come to my family. The kids are looking forward to seeing Aunt Jean. I believe we will have a very happy time.

Yours Sincerely, Lewis