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2016雅思寫作範文思路解析

 2016雅思寫作範文思路解析:鄰里之間不再認識的原因

Task:There is an increasing number of people who do not know their neighbors, what causes this situation? How to solve?

 思路解析:

1. 第一原因就是基於網絡的`社交網絡的流行。現在的大眾,尤其是年輕人,早就習慣於通過臉譜,推特和微信來進行日常的交流了,對他們而言,用手機來接送信息和分享圖片和情緒比實際跟人聊天更方便,更有吸引力。

2. 第二原因就是工資壓力大,人們整天忙於加班,開會,甚至在晚上和週末都待在辦公室處理公務。所以,和鄰居聊天是即沒時間,又沒心情。

3. 第三個原因就是現代城市的建築格局。現代的住房像鴿子籠,高高的牆壁把人們都隔離開,鄰居彼此碰面的機會不過是坐電梯時的偶然碰面。

4. 解決之道:第一,更多的社交活動應該在社區舉辦,如聚會,集體運動等等,這能為眾人創造相互認識的空間。第二,應該限制社會工作時間,禁止加班,讓職員能享受充分的私人時間來和他人一起娛樂。

  參考範文:

Today, there is a worrying trend that a neighbor is more like a stranger next door, and residents have no interests in communicating with others living nearby. In this essay, I will explore the possible reasons and proper solutions to this social issue.

The foremost reason stems from the change in communication between people. In fact, in an age driven by the Internet, people, especially youngsters, have had a preference to using social networking for connection, like Facebook, Twitter and Wechat, over depending on physical face-to-face discussion. Therefore, as long as the Internet-based socialization draws all attentions and energy from people, these netters would be unconsciously strange from people living around.

Another reason is that under the stress of job competition, there has been a common work-oriented lifestyle among adults, which means full devotion into jobs, prolonged working hours, extra tasks and meetings at night or weekends. As a result, people could not afford to spend time on gossiping about weather, dogs and new babies, in a similar way that traditional neighbors used to do.

On the other hand, interactive face-to-face contact among neighbors has become rare because of modern housing plans. In big cities, for instance, it seems that families are either "caged" like animals in department units of tall buildings, or are separated by walls usually two meters high. In both cases, neighbors appear to be at once so near, and yet so far away. As a result, the level of personal communication among neighbors is declining.

In my view, there are two mains ways for the solution to this issue. Firstly, more group activities like parties and sports should be held in the community. Through these interactions, people living in neighborhood would embrace more opportunities to know more about each other. In addition, the laws with the function of limiting work time of social employees should be enacted and carried out strictly, which can help people recover their leisure time by sharing which people can make friendship and familiarity with neighbors.

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