雅思圖表作文的本質:對比對照
趨勢描述(上升,下降)
上升的動詞:increase, rise, surge, enlarge, swell, soar, enhance, climb, jump, augment, go up
下降的動詞:decrease, descend, decline, drop, shrink, diminish[/vw], [wv]dwindle, taper
形容動詞的副詞:considerably, sharply, remarkably, dramatically, greatly, drastically, extremely, steadily, substantially, continually, continuously, moderately, respectively, generally, slightly, mainly, strikingly
例子文章:
Stock prices have been extremely volatile. They climbed steadily in the 1950’s, reached a peak in 1966, and then fluctuated up and down until 1973, when they fell sharply. Stock prices had recovered substantially by the early 1980s when a major stock market boom again, sending to Dow Jones Industry Average (DJIA) to a peak of 2722 on August 25,1987. After a 17% decline over the next month and a half, the stock market experienced the worst one-day drop in its entire history on “Black Monday”, October 19, 1987, when the DJIA fell by more than 500 points, a 22% decline.
句型的變化:
1. 主體做主語+increase
Between 1940 and 1985 the proportion of the elderly people increased remarkably from about 17% in Sweden and 9% in the USA to 13% and 15% respectively.
2. 年代做主語+saw + increase
The period from 1940 to 1985 saw a generally steady increase in the proportion of …
3.地點做主語+experienced +increase
Both the USA and Sweden experienced an alarming/moderately surge/increase in the proportion of…
寫作時首段應是命題的改寫
主體段應描寫大的特徵或大趨勢的概括(關鍵資料支援)
關鍵資料即起點終點座標,最大最小值,偶爾會用交點座標,部分特徵拐點座標。
得分注意點:
1. 句子的銜接和句子結構的變化
2. 分詞和比較結構的使用
3. 從句的.使用
4. 整篇文章萬萬不可主觀推理分析,否則扣分
首段是資訊段,不能照抄命題,只能改寫命題,概括主要的研究內容,研究物件,時間和地點。如果是兩個圖,必須分開來寫,句型常用s…,…illustrate … (劍五P52,劍四P100劍四P54)
For example:
(首段)The three lines in the chart each show the changes in the proportion of the elderly people to the population of the USA, Sweden and Japan from 1940 till today. Also the chart gives predicted date for the trends.
(主體段)Since 1940, the proportion in the USA has been slightly higher than that in Sweden at any given time, while that in Japan was always the smallest. Specially, the figures for the three countries in 1940 were 9%, 7%, 5% respectively. The changes in the proportion in the USA and Sweden are featured mainly by steady increase although since 1980 the USA experienced somewhat declines. By contrast, Japan did not see increase substantially, sending it to a peak of 5% in 2007, the same as in 1940. According to the prediction since 2000, the upward trends will have been obvious in the three countries, but in Japan will soar at the fastest speed. Till/By 2040 the figure will have reached 27%, compared with25% in the USA and 23% in Sweden.
另一篇文章,主要展示最值的表達
In the term of the length of the Underground Railway System (URS), that in London ranks first among the six in that it reaches 394km, almost 36 times longer than that in Kyoto, the shortest. The second longest is in Paris (199km).
Focusing on the open date, we see that once again London URS was strikingly earlier than all other counterparts. Put it accurately, London opened the URS as early as in1863, 37 years earlier than that in Paris. By contrast, the youngest is LA who did not start to run URS until 2001.
說明文注重語言的流暢,簡潔。在圖表作文中,不追求詞藻的華麗,只追求表達的清楚。
注意點:1.沒有必要寫出每條資訊,要辨別關鍵特徵
2.段落劃分要合理(得分點)
3.銜接和過渡詞很重要
一整篇文章的例子:劍五P75
To be located in the town centre,S2 is in the town centre, a non-traffic zone. As result, it is only accessible by the railway whereas the main roads are unavailable. Moreover, it is hemmed out the houses, meaning it’s convenient for the dwellers to do some shopping. In addition, it is closer to the south industry but far away from the north.
Unlike S2, S1 will be set in the countryside, where both the railway and main roads are ready. But the 44000 people from Bransdon and Crandson find it not easy to reach S1, although it is connected by the railway with Crandson. Furthermore, this site is far away from the two industry areas. However, it is convenient for those who live in Hindo.
To sum up, the two sites are different in many aspects/ways.
小結:柱狀圖可變成線性圖
餅狀圖可變成表格圖(表格題中,在物件的旁邊標識出上升,下降,或有變化的箭頭,之後,將同類上升的寫一段,下降的寫一段,不穩定的單列一段)
流程示意圖及步驟圖(使用總分結構,著重對比和過程的描述,關鍵詞firstly, secondly, thirdly, finally, to begin with, and then, further more…)
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