雅思写作高分范文及结构分析
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雅思写作高分范文:
The two drawings illustrate the changes of the same island before and after the construction ofsome transport and service buildings.
It is clear that before development, the horizontal island which is about 260 meters long has a Few trees on both east and west sides. Furthermore, on the west edge, a small beach is located for tourism in the future.
The layout changes tremendously after buildings are constructed in almost the whole island. The trees on the east side are kept for the natural view.
However, the west trees are surrounded by some accommodation houses, with a footpath linked to the beach where a swimming zone is closely connected, Next to the western accommodation, there is a reception building around which a vehicle track road heading to the south pier for tourist sailing is just paved. On the opposite side of the pier, a restaurant stands at the north side near the seashore. The center of, the island is also designed to supply housing for tourists.
In sum, comparing the two drawings,tremendous developments have been e developments make the whole island crowded with modern facilities, which may cause damages to the environment.
作文结构分析:
范文由四段组成:第一段为引言段,主要介绍该图表展示的是什么方面的信息;第二段对改建之前的岛屿进行描述;第三段对改建之后岛屿的设施和交通进行描述:最后一段对两个图表体现出来的总体特点(overview)进行归纳,同时也表达了对岛屿环境的担忧。
亮点词汇:
第一段:
Illustrate 以图表的.形式说明
Construction 建设;建筑物
第二段:
Horizontal 水平的;地平线的
第三段:
Layout 格局,布局
Tremendously 惊人地,非常地,可怕地
Accommodation 住处
Reception 接待,接收;招待会;感受,反应
Seashore 海滨,海岸
Crowded with 充满,挤满
亮点语句:
I. The two drawings illustrate the changes of the same island before and after the construction of some transport and service buildings.
两幅图画描绘了同一座岛屿在建造交通服务设施前后的变化。
2. However, the west trees are surrounded by some accommodation houses, with a footpath linked to the beach where a swimming zone is closely connected.
然而,西边的树林周围则建起了一座座的房屋,房屋和紧挨着游泳区的海滩之间由一
条道路连接。
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